Margaret Talks Cohesive Narratives and Princeton Pride

Margaret Commander

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The story

Margaret’s story is a masterclass in letting your values lead the way. Instead of crafting the “perfect” application, she built one that reflected who she truly was—curious, grounded, and quietly bold. By creating her own research opportunities and writing essays that traced her personal throughline, she showed that standing out doesn’t always mean being flashy; sometimes, it means being consistent, thoughtful, and intentional. For anyone unsure how to tie their interests together or wondering how to approach essays without a dramatic story, Margaret’s journey offers a clear, grounded example of how authenticity can speak louder than spectacle. At a high school without formal research programs, Margaret still found a way to conduct independent historical research the summer before senior year. She called it an “independent study,” but it was really a signal: she wasn’t waiting for a class to tell her what she could learn. “I basically just wrote my own research paper… I wanted to do more in terms of actual historical research and not just taking classes,” she said. That instinct—to pursue truth, not just credit—became the heartbeat of her Princeton application. And it was intentional. “Princeton really values independent research,” she noted. “That translated well to what I wanted to do there and after.”

Truth, Tradition, and the Essays That Held It All Together

Her Common App essay wasn’t about one memory or event—it was a value-driven piece centered around the pursuit of truth. “I connected every single thing I had basically ever done to that,” she said. That included her love of film photography, her independent research, and her broader intellectual worldview.

"It felt more natural to me, and that helped me show myself holistically."

For one of Princeton’s supplements, she picked a prompt about tradition. “It complemented my Common App well… I clearly showed a very cohesive character, but was able to demonstrate even more of that in a different way.” It's important to view your application as a whole and use each essay topic as an opportunity to tell a different yet connected side of your story. Even her short answers were strategic in their own offbeat way—her favorite quote, for instance, came from The Death of Stalin: “When I said no problem, what I meant was no problem.” That mix of values, personality, and understated humor became her calling card.

"Sometimes that personality might be really deep and philosophical. But sometimes it might be thinking The Death of Stalin is really funny."

Fit Isn’t Just Academic

Margaret didn’t try to game the process or project what she thought admissions officers wanted to hear. Instead, she leaned into what Princeton already believed.

"I wrote about how my values aligned. I really wanted to do international affairs… and Princeton has a motto... 'in the nation's service and the service of humanity.' That public service attitude really spoke to me."

When she was deferred during the early round, she wrote a letter of continued interest—reaffirming that alignment without spiraling into panic. “I expected to get denied,” she admitted. “And then I got in.” Many of the scholars we interview feel the same way, so don't count yourself out in applying to a school you really connect with. Her advice for future applicants: don’t get too attached to any single outcome.

"You don't want to go to a school that was really on the fence about you. It’s not the right fit. Be as detached as possible."

The Community Princeton is Building

According to Margaret, Princeton isn’t looking for a specific type of student—but they are looking for a specific kind of authenticity. “The beauty of Princeton is that everyone is—if not one of one—then one of very few,” she said. Some students are hyper-specialized. Others, like her, connect seemingly unrelated interests through a core set of values. What matters is that you show up with something only you can offer. “It doesn't feel like you're at a school with a bunch of carbon copies.” That insight shaped how she approached her application.

"Try to be as authentic as you can… have a fundamental set of values or a character idea that everything else connects back to."

Princeton's community doesn't end with graduation either. Their annual reunion is a 3 day event with the second most beer consumption of any event in the US under the Indy 500. It's a great way to relive the fun of college, make connections with fellow alumni, and enjoy familiar faces.

"It’s steeped in tradition and excitement, people get really excited and just love Princeton post-grad. I don’t know a single person who walked away from Princeton not loving it and saying 'I don’t know what to say about my experience' to themselves."

Margaret’s Advice

Be values-driven. Everything tied back her pursuit of truth. That made her application feel cohesive without being formulaic. It fit with her intended major and Princeton's values, but because she was a genuinely good fit for the school. Do your research to identify what parts of the school resonate with your genuine interests and intentions. Don’t overthink the little stuff. Sometimes your short answers just need to be fun or honest. “Don’t try to be something you’re not.” Remember that admissions isn’t a ranking. “Just because you don’t get in somewhere—or you do—doesn’t mean you're the worst or the best. It's just an opportunity.”

The Researcher 🔬 & The Genuine Article ✨

Margaret Commander fits most squarely into the Researcher archetype. The Researcher is defined by deep, original academic inquiry and a demonstrated desire to ask complex questions—and Margaret didn’t wait for permission to do exactly that. Without access to formal programs, she created her own independent study in history the summer before senior year, writing a full research paper to explore international affairs on her own terms. This self-motivated project wasn’t just about building her résumé—it was a genuine expression of intellectual curiosity, the kind that research universities like Princeton look for when admitting students who will contribute meaningfully to faculty labs, institutes, or think tanks. Margaret also reflects traits of the Genuine Article—a student whose application reads as deeply personal, self-aware, and grounded in honesty. Her Common App essay didn’t follow a flashy narrative arc or center on a dramatic turning point. Instead, she wove together her interests through the unifying thread of “pursuit of truth,” tracing her character and values with quiet confidence and vulnerability. That combination, self-directed scholarship and unfiltered sincerity, made her both intellectually compelling and emotionally resonant on paper.

Be bold, be Scholarly... like Margaret